How to Turn Your Draft Into a Polished Novel: Editor Joel Brigham Breaks It Down

Episode Summary

In this episode of Writers With Wrinkles, professional editor Joel Brigham returns to deliver a revision roadmap for writers ready to transform rough drafts into submission-ready manuscripts. Packed with actionable tips, this episode is a must-listen for anyone preparing to query agents or self-publish with confidence.

Guest Bio

Joel Brigham is a seasoned editor, teacher, and former NBA journalist with deep roots in storytelling and manuscript development. Known for his structured approach to revisions and ability to connect with writers at all levels, Joel empowers authors to build stronger narratives and make smarter editorial choices.

Key Discussion Points

1. Revisions in Phases
Joel outlines a multi-phase editing strategy, emphasizing the importance of starting with story structure—especially the “tentpole” beats: the inciting incident, midpoint turn, and “all hope is lost” moment. Getting these in place sets the foundation for effective pacing and emotional arcs.

2. Story Structure That Works
Joel uses the “But/Therefore” rule (borrowed from South Park creators) to evaluate whether scenes logically build on each other. If your story reads like “and then, and then…,” you may have structure issues. Replace passive progression with active cause-and-effect.

3. A Self-Editing Checklist
Joel offers a goldmine of revision questions:

• Are your key beats in the right place?

• Do all characters have motivation and arcs?

• Does every chapter contain tension?

• Are stakes clear and compelling?

• Does your dialogue sound natural when read aloud?

• Is your opening a hook and your ending a mic drop?

4. Character Agency and Voice
A major red flag in early drafts is a passive protagonist. Characters should drive the story through choices and consequences. On voice, Joel advises mimicking admired authors early on, then evolving into your own style over time through feedback and cross-genre writing.

5. Word Count and Readability
Genre expectations matter. A 70,000-word epic fantasy will likely be rejected outright. Joel also recommends checking Lexile and Flesch-Kincaid scores for middle grade and YA writers to ensure age-appropriate readability.

6. Proofreading and Polish
Final polish should be the last step. Joel advises writers to revise one element at a time—structure, then character, then voice, and so on—before proofreading. “Don’t waste time proofreading scenes you might delete.”

7. Momentum and Patience
Writers often rush to query before the manuscript is truly ready. Joel emphasizes taking breaks between revision rounds to gain perspective. Success in publishing often comes from persistence and long-term commitment.

Conclusion and Takeaways

Joel Brigham’s expert revision advice is a lifeline for writers teetering on the edge of submission. His practical steps—like reading dialogue aloud, using a structured self-editing checklist, and focusing on character agency—can dramatically increase the chances of capturing an agent’s attention. The biggest takeaway? Don’t rush. The extra revision rounds may be the difference between rejection and success.

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