QUERY LETTER EXAMPLE from The Big Picture, part 2: where we edit and submit a picture book for publication

This is the query letter we created to send to publishers. REMEMBER to check the submission specifics for each publisher. They are ALL slightly different.

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[Subject] Cat’s Rule - A Charming Tale of Unlikely Friendship

Dear [Acquisitions Editor],

I hope this email finds you well. My name is Beth McMullen, and I am thrilled to submit our children's picture book manuscript, Cat’s Rule, co-authored with Lisa Schmid, for your consideration at [Publisher].

• Title: Cat’s Rule 
• Authors: Beth McMullen and Lisa Schmid 
• Target Age Group: 3-6 
• Word Count: 427 
• Themes: Friendship, Acceptance, Humor

Synopsis: 

Cat’s Rule is the whimsical tale of a rule-loving cat convinced that cats and dogs cannot be friends. A playful and persistent dog challenges this notion, leading to a series of heartwarming and humorous encounters. From sharing toys to experiencing bath time together, each activity playfully questions the cat's strict rules. The story culminates with a touching conclusion, where the cat embraces the possibility of friendship with a dog, teaching children the value of open-mindedness and the joy found in unexpected relationships.

Author Backgrounds: 

Beth McMullen is the author of many books for adults and children, including the acclaimed middle grade Mrs. Smith’s Spy School for Girls series. Lisa Schmid is the author of the well-received middle grade ghost story Ollie Oxley and the Ghost, and the forthcoming Hart & Souls, which releases in July 2024. Lisa and Beth are the co-hosts of the popular writing podcast, Writers With Wrinkles.

Market Positioning: 

We believe Cat’s Rule uniquely positions itself in the children's book market, combining humor with meaningful lessons. Comparable to titles such as [make sure your comps are appropriate and current!], our book stands out with its witty dialogue and elevated humor that will appeal to children and their parents.

Submission: 

Attached, please find the complete manuscript of Cat’s Rule.

Thank you for considering Cat’s Rule for publication. We are excited about the prospect of working with you and bringing this charming story to young readers everywhere. Please don’t hesitate to reach out for additional information or discussion.

Warm regards,

Beth McMullen & Lisa Schmid

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