Nail Your First Page: Real Critiques from Publishing Pros
Send us a text Want to watch the video? Click here. Episode Summary In this Ask Beth & Lisa episode of Writers With Wrinkles, Beth and Lisa dive into first-page critiques, offering real-time feedback on listener-submitted rom-com and middle grade openings. Aspiring authors will gain insight into what makes a first page hook an editor—and what doesn’t. Guest Bio No guest this week—just your favorite co-hosts offering expert feedback, writerly wisdom, and a behind-the-scenes look at their...
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Episode Summary
In this Ask Beth & Lisa episode of Writers With Wrinkles, Beth and Lisa dive into first-page critiques, offering real-time feedback on listener-submitted rom-com and middle grade openings. Aspiring authors will gain insight into what makes a first page hook an editor—and what doesn’t.
Guest Bio
No guest this week—just your favorite co-hosts offering expert feedback, writerly wisdom, and a behind-the-scenes look at their creative process.
Key Discussion Points
• Why first pages matter more than ever in today’s publishing landscape
• Rom-Com critique: Bohemian Girl in Ruins – balancing snark and heart, setting tone, and why emotional vulnerability matters
• Craft insights: Using voice, internal conflict, and pacing to create immediate reader engagement
• Middle Grade critique: Liam Calloway and the Cosmic Conspiracy – voice authenticity, anchoring in-scene emotion, and hooking readers fast
• Red flags in opening pages—over-describing, passive language, and missing stakes
• Foreshadowing, genre expectations, and how to revise for connection, not just cleverness
• Sneak peek into Beth and Lisa’s video podcast debut and future live retreat plans
Conclusion
This episode reminds writers that capturing attention on page one is both art and strategy. Whether you're polishing a rom-com or drafting a middle grade novel, grounding your character, tightening the prose, and creating emotional stakes are key to making your manuscript stand out.
Links & Resources
• Submit your first page: https://writerswithwrinkles.net
• Instagram: @writerswithwrinkles
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